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Pick the sentence that avoids redundancy and wordiness.
We hoped that the person who managed the restaurant would sponsor our baseball team.
We all really hoped that the restaurant person would sponsor our baseball sports team
We hoped that the restaurant manager would sponsor our baseball team.
We were all really hoping that the person who managed the restaurant would sponsor our baseball team.

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Answer:

We hoped that the restaurant manager would sponsor our baseball team.

Explanation:

Avoiding "redundancy and wordiness" is eliminating unnecessary words without changing the meaning of the sentence.

This sentence uses fewer words without altering (changing) the meaning of the sentence.

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