Rewrite each telling sentence with several sentences that recreate the scene more vividly. Think of word choice and use senses (e.g., smell, touch, sight, taste, sound) to SHOW the scene.

1. The woman had a terrible headache.
As she walked back home, shoulders down to the depths of the earth, her eyes black as coal and her stomach having the growl of the kings of jungles, she could hear a screaming sound. She looked around but saw everything was . Relieved that nothing

2. The boy witnessed the car accident.